Illegal Immigrant CH28 - Happily Ever After

I can see in the diaper dimension, depending on the boss, breaking rules is a sign of immaturity no matter your size, depending on probably what the Bigs did or how many times they've been told to stop and could possibly get punished by getting spanked or worse. I can see it happening more in places like adoption centers, etiquette centers and daycare.

Guilend

Whelp, at least she can see the portal in her dreams, right? In all honesty, I have no clue if she'll be getting back, but I'm sure excited to see how things go for her either way, and I hope everyone else is too! Thank you for reading and commenting!

As bad as things continue to get, I can't help but think that Dawn, and possibly us as the readers, may not fully realize the full scope of just what Dawn is sticking herself into. That, and just maybe her actions keep causing ripples that drastically affect where and how things will go for her! Thank you for reading and commenting!

Thank you! I'm looking forward to the next one too!

After all, it's always a matter of perspective! Glad you're enjoying, and it's always fun to read everyone's speculation. Half of why I hate being the one who writes, because I always love to be on the receiving end of these stories! Thank you for reading, commenting, and sharing your thoughts!

The plot thickens! And so does Dawn's diapers? Hmm...! Assuming best intentions, this is hopefully Dawn's best situation yet. While we can't say for certain what James would've done to her, I don't think it would've been anything monstrous. It's just my guess right now, but I think it was Dawn's panic attack that made the moment far more terrifying than it actually was. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Veronica definitely seemed to pounce on this one without much hesitation, but she does come off as earnest and kind-hearted. Who knows though, maybe even the caretakers get spankings dished out to them! Thanks for the fun comment and reading!

Free food? A bed? AND someone promised her to research an escape route? What story are you reading?! This is her best opportunity yet! A bit more as an author's note, I'm trying to be creative but fair to the universe this story's in with trying to justify and come up with some of the legal jargon, haha. Whether it happens or not, returning to James and Katherine's custody is an interesting challenge, given how much has happened to Dawn on their watch...! Thank you so much for reading and leaving responses! They're always so much fun to read!

A new adventure in a new place! Unlike James and Katherine though, this woman does seem to have some credentials that could make escape a bit more possible. But ultimately it's all a big wait-and-see.

I'd like to imagine James and Katherine wouldn't opt for anything surgical or permanently damaging, if they did ever go the route of stricter supervision. I could totally see a harness or stroller in Dawn's lifetime, though. Then again, who knows if she'll wind up back with them ever again! Thank you for commenting!

Yeesh, I'd hate to imagine the kind of restrictions she might have...assuming she even does go back to them...!

Hmm...we'll have to be cautious for now, but who knows? At least on paper so far it seems like a pretty good deal. And as great as Katherine and James are, escape with them at the moment is seeming more and more like a pipedream. Thank you so much for the comment, and I'm so sorry for the late response!

In chapter 1 the woman who first took Dawn from the tour group told Dawn that she lived one town over. Dawn better hope that the same woman doesn’t come looking to adopt at the orphanage, or if she makes a successful escape from the orphanage she may just find herself right back where she on the final day of her tour, again taken off the street by the same woman who was determined that doll like tiny Dawn was going to be her forever tot.

I can’t see Dawn ever getting back to the portal. Without someone’s help. She has already been taken to another town at least one.

After her third attempt at running away Dawn’s days of walking are as you suggest most likely over, any other Amazon would have her Achilles tendons cut so that she was restricted to crawling and riding on her tummy in a pram, if she is lucky enough to get back to Katherine the end result will most likely be a toddler safety harness if she is allowed to walk or safety secured in a baby stroller.

When LPS get the call they will most certainly know who Dawn is. If Dawn's two earlier escape attempts were reported to LPS (by the store security and the nosy woman who grabbed Dawn off the sidewalk foiling her getaway from the house) Katherine and James will have some serious explaining to do to LPS if they are ever going to be given custody of Dawn again. What will the view of LPS be after three successful escapes from Katherine and James, their ability to keep Dawn safe from harm will no doubt be called into question. Could that be the catalyst for Dawn to be handed over to one of the other woman who also wanted to take her? If the woman from the hotel called LPS the night that James took her buck naked from her hotel room, a trial placement could be ordered with her while LPS assess which Mommy is best placed to adopt Dawn permanently? Then there is still the first woman that took her off the street from the tour group, LPS will also know about that event as it was reported. Meanwhile every hour Dawn spends in the orphanage will be a threat to her adult abilities. Urma has already convinced her that she needs to go with the normal routine and gullible Dawn has readily accepted that she will be using her diapers with the promise of getting back to Earth. 'Oh Dawn, look over your shoulder and see how far you have fallen ... and think about how easy it was for Urma to convince you to play the part of another diapered local little.' The line has been cast and the hook set, now all LPS need to do is reel you in.

Noooo! Seens like Dawn get in trouble now, I hope she learn somethineg about this, wish James and Catherine find Dawn Asap but I don't think that she goes for home too early

i cannot wait for more to this story!!

Hope your travels are treating you well! Dawn might have gotten herself in an even worse situation now. It is hard to tell how good Ms. Urna's word is right now. For all we know she could have told a similar story to dozen of other Littles. Begin the top priority for James and Katherine was probably a much better deal. Dawn is now going to competing for attention with a bunch of other Littles. I wonder if this "fun" arc is going to be fun from Dawn's perspective. Still too early to tell!

FatherFish

This is an interesting twist of events. I’m curious of Urna’s motives and exactly why they have to keep Dawn’s story under wraps. Seems fishy. But who knows what James intended to do to Dawn. Maybe this is the lesser of the two evils in the moment for what the moment is. Did Dawn just condemn herself to a worse fate? 🧐 Or is Urna legit in her promise? Looking forward to finding out!

I had a feeling this was going to happen at some point, well something similar. I hope Veronica gets spanked and diapered once the boss finds out what actually is going on. I have a feeling that Veronica has messed up on things a few times. I bet it wouldn't even be her first spanking since she became an adult Amazon or since she started working there lol

Guilend

Uh-oh... Dawn went from relative safety to the worst place she could be. See if Katherine and James can even legally get her back at this point... She was checked out by LPS, so maybe that will help. I'm sure they accused kidnapping back at the store. I doubt she makes it out of there unscathed. I'm sure she's about to appreciate real food more though, a bowl sounds very pureed to me! Glad to see an update to this story! Hope your travels are going well!

babysofia1234

The light at the end of the tunnel is a mirage for Dawn. When this is over, she will be begging for her mommy, Katherine!

Dawn just made things more complicated. LPS might have Dawn stay there during the investigation. Poor James and Katherine though…if Dawn goes with them she won’t be walking around stores again anytime soon!

Omg, fantastic, Dawn is the making of her own demise, these Amazon’s have led her on a merry dance and she has fallen for it hook, line and sinker.