Illegal Immigrant CH20 - Dumb and Difficult

I totally agree with you. Something like that has to happen. I don’t see any way around it

Guilend

My suspicions are that it will need Dawn to experience a reality check of being fully immersed in the life of an amazons baby before she finally realises that what she has with James and Katherine is the far better option, until then she will keep complaining that she is being hard done by. That could happen a number of ways, being taken by LPS and put in an emergency foster placement or given to the woman from the hotel for a trial placement, being babysat by Katherine’s or Kailey’s Mom or making an escape attempt and being picked up off the street by a different Amazon.

I totally get it. I guess I just like taboo even in the DD 😂 Honestly I don’t care if it ever happens in any DD story I read. Though reading a DD story I find different places in the story that spurs my what if imagination and that’s what makes me love most DD stories.

Guilend

Hmm, this is definitely something to ponder! And yeah, somehow Dawn not having much of choice in most things seems like it'd add up, should it happen.

Amazons in diaper dynamics is something I've read about in other stories, but admittedly it's not high on my personal list when it comes to DD. Normal adults baying normal adults to me is cause for writing a non-DD story, but that's not to say I don't get what kind of substance it brings and fun stuff it leverages for DD. Just admittedly not my first go-to. And yeah, poor Dawn. Just wants to read!

Have to agree with you on that count but I suspect Dawn is going to be seeing more of Kailey and her Mommy as the plot develops and she won’t have any say in that matter.

Your crafting of how clever Amazons and Amazonian society are is well done. Every time Dawn things she has the upper edge she is defeated by the unknown. With Katherine’s love of plants and the outdoors perhaps they will take Dawn on a hike where she seizes the chance to make a get away to the portal station or an unfriendly Amazon realises that Dawn is not officially adopted yet and makes off with her to the nearest adoption facility.🧷🧷👩‍🍼 That would crank up the temperature in the story and causes some real heartache for Katherine and James.🏃‍♀️🏃🏻‍♂️

During the diaper change I was half expecting (fine more of a wish I made as I was reading it lol) that it would be an Amazon young adult waiting to get a diaper change mostly because I thought it would throw Dawn for a loop and I thought it would be funny. But I definitely didn’t expect who did show up. I’m with Dawn. That kid is annoying

Guilend

With both parents working and no daycare for Dawn that won’t be a good plan when LPS come snooping. Agree on them pushing the ‘Littles best interest at heart’ line, to determine that though Dawn needs to experience what the other options are and LPS need to observe her in each of the possible arrangements before landing on the choice that is ‘best for Dawn’. Great work, looking forward to the next instalment.

I'm hoping to sneak some more fun stuff like that in moving down the line! I want to add more stuff like the library sorting system that puts this world into perspective for Dawn, intelligence wise. It's a pillar I wanna build on because it's going to be more than likely the most immovable fact she has to face in this place. This chapter I would say is the first time we're starting to see how smart the average Amazon can be, and I want to turn up on that dial a bit more as things progress. Glad you enjoyed the plant analogy, and I hope I delivered on it well! How that plays into Katherine's character I think is fairly important, so I'll be looking forward to hopefully doing her execution justice!

I'm sure LPS will be around sooner rather than later. For all we know they're doing distant investigations right now just to truly vet Katherine and James out, who knows? Though from a writing standpoint, I hope to put a bit of a fun/crafty presence with LPS. Really want to push on that "A Little's best interest at heart" while also shoehorning that into official policy.

Thank you very much!

Yeah that's a fair point. Practically anything seems like it can be used as ammunition against poor Dawn. Even the things that get misconstrued like Kailey...

Yeah, there's still a bit up in the air right now that we don't know much about in the way of specifics. Though I'm sure as time goes on we'll find out more!

She might be in the clear for now but at some point it will become blatantly obvious that Dawn hasn’t been officially adopted by Katherine and James and that will expose her to the risk of being taken by another Amazon or LPS will get involved while the situation is sorted out. Loving this story so far, well done!

She might be out of daycare for the afternoon but it could also be problematic for Dawn, especially if Kaylee’s no nonsense Mom offers to host a play date for the girls. Perhaps Katherine will need a babysitter on Saturday while she has her hair appointment and James is off fishing with his buddies.

Poor Dawn. Even when she should be in her element, she can’t avoid being made to feel small. Though, the library’s numbering system is an interesting piece of world building. Sounds kind of like Roman numerals. Amazonian numerals? Katherine is well into mommy mode today. She is no doubt very happy to teach Dawn something new today. Katherine’s character and mindset continue to develop quite nicely. Plants definitely aren’t the only thing she would love to watch grow… Love the callback with the free samples. That’s a memory Dawn isn’t living down anytime soon.

FatherFish

And for a minute it looked like Katherine had unwittingly presented Dawn with another opportunity for an escape attempt when she left her to nap under a desk with the expectation that Grace would watch her. The edge of the cliff is crumbling still and Dawn somehow manages to survive to fight another day….. still keen to see an LPS intervention at some point if possible just to give Dawn the reality check that she so desperately needs.

I know whether she goes home or not is still TBD but then again you could be just stringing us all along for a massive plot twist…lol! Great chapter and I am glad Dawn seems to be in the clear at least so far.

Lovely update! Thank you for sharing your talent!

I think Dawn might have given Katherine room to wiggle out of the Daycare deal, since she doesn't like Dayna and her new special friend Kaylee is going

Ryan

The war does wage on. I'm sure they'll have more physical moments, or I can at least think of a couple cute scenes that can be done between the two. Only time will tell how they develop, though! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Glad I could pull through! Thank you for reading and enjoying!

Assuming we're just coasting from here, I think Dawn is probably in the clear. No real harm done, so no need for a bad report for James! I'm sure we'll be back at the library again at some point, however! Also, who said that Dawn isn't going home? Not for certain yet! Still being determined!

Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah though, seems like Katherine kind of went out on a limb for her. And yeah, 'stupid'. I'd say Katherine might be in the camp that's more concerned about HOW you use your words more than WHAT you use, but since Dawn is just a kid to her, she probably isn't trusted with that sort of nuance, as well as just not wanting kids to learn bad speaking habits! Uh-oh... After running the totals, yeah, it's about 178k words or so, which is a little embarrassing with only this being how far the story has come. That being said, I do enjoy taking time to flesh the characters out, but longer stories are definitely longer stories for me. I absolutely do want to "finish" these sorts of things though so that they don't go on forever! DD is a weird relationship for me. I do like the dimension and have enjoyed reading stuff from you over the years as well as others, but unless I'm being commissioned for it or I think I have something legitimately new/want to try something out, I'm tending to avoid it altogether when it comes to my own writing. (And yet, here I am writing about it!) It's not my first preference just because I feel like it's already so popular and from a contribution perspective I could be making other kinds of stories with totally different premises. I dunno, I do like writing DD stories, but sometimes I feel like I'm writing for a niche that's been filled by so many talented others! Sorry for ranting! Also, not so explicit since I couldn't find a clever last name, but I may have stole your first for a book author. Thanks, Sofia Suffix! I kinda made some loose references in an earlier chapter when Dawn was reading other book titles as well! Exchanged was another very loose mention!

A true victory for Dawn, but the eternal war to keep any form of independence will rage on. I really am looking forward to more physical intimacy between dawn and Katherine. I really hope the mother/baby daughter relationship takes a bigger step! And great work as always.

💕I really needed that today 💕 thank you!

AndTheChips

Nice chapter! Library visits for me are certainly never this entertaining or involved, of course the last couple times I was in a library was for working on papers in undergrad and grad school. I do wonder what is going to happen when James hears about the day and as dawn learns she really isn’t going home. Looking forward to more!

It was a great chapter! Glad Katherine at least gave her a little bit of a break there! (Never understood 'stupid' being a bad word myself... I'd be in trouble with her too! On a side note you have seriously entered into some length at this point! Almost 180k words by my reckoning? That definitely puts this into the longer category for DD or abdl stories in general! Hope to keep seeing more of this!

babysofia1234

Sorry! Kinda pushed it with this one; I just wanted to make sure I wrapped up the first Library visit in this chapter. Hope ya enjoy!